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The following appeared as part of an article in the education
section of a Waymarsh
City newspaper.
Throughout the last two decades, those
who earned graduate degrees found it very difficult
to get jobs teaching their academic specialties at the college level. Those
with graduate degrees from
Waymarsh University had an especially hard time finding
such jobs. But better times are coming in the next decade for all academic
job seekers, including those from
Waymarsh. Demographic trends indicate that an increasing
number of people will be reaching college age over the next ten years; consequently,
we can expect that the job market will improve dramatically for people
seeking college-level teaching positions in their fields.
Discuss how well reasoned... etc.
Demographic trends that indicate an increase
in the number of college-aged
people over the next ten years lead the
author to predict an improved job market
for all people seeking college-level teaching positions in their academic
disciplines. Moreover, the author argues that
since Waymarsh University students with advanced degrees had an especially
difficult time finding teaching jobs in the past, these trends
portend better
times ahead for Waymarsh graduates. This argument is problematic in three
important respects.
First, the author assumes that an increase in
the number of college-aged people over the next decade will necessarily result
in an increase in the number of people who
attend college during this period. While
this is a reasonable assumption, it is by no means a certainty.
For example, a world war or economic
depression in the next decade would certainly nullify
this expectation. Second,
even if we grant the
preceding assumption, we must also consider the additional assumption that
increased university enrollments will lead
to an increase in teaching positions in all fields. However, it might turn out
that some teaching specialties are in greater
demand than others in the future, resulting in a disproportionate number of
teaching positions available in various fields. Consequently,
persons trained in some fields might find it more difficult, if
not impossible, to find teaching jobs in
the future.
Finally, little can be foretold
regarding the employability
of Waymarsh graduates in the future based
on the information provided in the argument.
Lacking information about the reasons why Waymarsh graduates had an especially
difficult time finding teaching jobs, it is difficult
to assess their prospects for the future. It is probable,
however, that since Waymarsh has had an especially hard time placing graduates
in the past, the mere fact that more jobs are available will not, by
itself, ensure that Waymarsh graduates
will have an easier time finding teaching
jobs during the next decade.
In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing.
To strengthen the argument, the author must provide evidence that the only major
trend in the next decade will be an
increase in the number of people reaching college age. Regarding the future
prospects for Waymarsh graduates, the
author must provide evidence that there were no idiosyncratic
reasons that prevented them from finding
jobs in the past.
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